The image they chose was from Dave Dyet's series, titled Scanner Fear.
This is what I wrote:
“What is it?” he asked, gingerly testing the Wall with one finger.
“What do you mean, “What is it?” What does it LOOK like, dammit!”
The Wall was closed. Not only was it frozen shut, but souls were still attempting to come through.
“Sir, I don’t know what I can do. We have to tell him. If Master knew about the panic that is spreading in Otherside, maybe he would…”
“Maybe he would suddenly grow a conscience?” Disgust dripped from his words like acid. The dark figure glared at him; the cold steel in his expression produced chills in the air.
“But…,” the small pale figure squeaked, clearly terrified.
“You shouldn’t start presuming to tell me what to do.” More ghastly images appeared on the Wall, one horror stricken visage after another.
The eerily empty hall echoed as he walked away. The small pale figure turned again and stared up at the Wall. There was nothing he could do about the creepy silhouettes appearing on the walls. The once liquid Wall was still as death. In fact, the entire Wall marked Death.
So, reader, what do you think?
More edits coming this week. I have a lot of scraps that are taking up space on my hard drive. I will share these when I have nothing else to talk about. :)
More edits coming this week. I have a lot of scraps that are taking up space on my hard drive. I will share these when I have nothing else to talk about. :)
